Last Breath

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Blood drips like ribbons
as her voice trills in the dark
ending her last breath
©Pancake Bunnykins

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aranislandgirl says:

January 31, 2016 at 7:15 pm

Ha! Didn’t expect that haiku after reading your gravatar info! But your blog title suggests one could expect anything 🙂 Excellent use of the prompt words.

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1. Pancake Bunnykins says:
  
  January 31, 2016 at 7:27 pm
  
  Thank you so much! Yeah, I guess my blog is kinda twisted. 🙂
  
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2. aranislandgirl says:
  
  January 31, 2016 at 7:29 pm
  
  Love it–very unique 😀
  
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3. Pancake Bunnykins says:
  
  January 31, 2016 at 7:34 pm
  
  Thank you again! 🙂
  
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Vashti Quiroz-Vega says:

February 8, 2016 at 7:31 pm

Reads like a horror story I want to continue reading. 😉

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1. Pancake Bunnykins says:
  
  February 9, 2016 at 10:52 am
  
  Thank you, Vashti!
  
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